Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.
Age/Gender: n/a, Male
Location: Charleston, SC
Things here would be a lot different. But I made a typo during registration and it's all gone to crap.
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 135 / 180
Exp. Rank #: 165,226
Voting Pow.: 3.79 votes
BBS Posts: 0 (0 per day)
Flash Reviews: 15
Music Reviews: 0
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
All Flash Reviews
15 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
I'm just going to assume English is your second language or something and use that as the alibi for your Engrish. There's a couple "he"s in the third testimony that should be "she"s, for example.
Beyond that, it's quite close to an actual PW:AA case, right down to the DS-style interface and nerve-wracking moments where your only perceivable option is throwing evidence in everybody's faces.
Hope the grammatical problems go away with both this one's sequel and the Super Robot Taisen project you speak of in the credits.
Author's Response:
Yes, Thanks for your review. Its a matter of fact that english is my second language of course. Although, I practice it everyday by myself and not with people around me so much. The main thing is that I will fix the grammar for this edition, edit the testimony description that catches player's perceptions on the first testimony.
For Example:
In the first testimony I will have it:
1) I was driving my wheelchair outside my apartment cause I was depressed.
2) Suddenly, when I was out of my home, I found that virgin girl.
3) I knew her from the bar on that same day.
4) I saw her dead with a young man beside him.
5) I saw my clock and it was 2:40 AM.
That's all I can remember.
I think all the controversy was 1)grammar 2) the first testimony first 2 statements. And they killed me.
Like in Phoenix Wright in Mia's Case
Grossberg: You made him cry...
Grossberg: He deserved it!
Super Robot Taisen..yeah, I have to see first if copyright material are set away. Otherwise, I have to do my own graphics or do something else. Well, it will be a bigger project than phoenix wright. But at least I will not be subjected by the story since it will not be the main interactivity of the gameplay. Thanks for your review.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
By now, you've already caught enough flak for the Milkshake sequence. My real beef, though, is Clip #2, with Edgey going all emo. Ashford did it first with Cody, and he did it right.
Points docked for reused material, but extra Violence and recouped Style for being the first Phoenix Wrong to incorporate Franziska's whip.
Beyond that, EXTREME CLOSE-UP!
Author's Response:
Really? I never saw a scene with same audio as Clip #2...
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
A couple audio goofs (most notably the very first clip), but still enjoyable.
Author's Response:
That sound was quiet even in the original source mp3 (which was rather faded by comparison).
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Unfortunately, using one of my new favorite GBA games won't save you. The whole thing just doesn't mesh well.
And Graham and J should've been in there somewhere. Three characters does not a cast make - Skittles 'n' Bitz and Phoenix Wrong should've taught you that.
Author's Response:
Honestly not a fan of SnB, just noticed the similarity... anyway, three characters does SO a cast make! Just look at the Lil Buzzers!
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
It's like something a 4channer would come up with. If 4chan was appreciative of the NEW AND EXCITING, anyway.
JESUS CHRIST IT'S A SLIME GET IN THE CAR
Author's Response:
Anonymous reviewer obliges.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.